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Recent Movie Reviews

8 Movie Reviews

you got it, you actually got it

amazing

joeysworldtour looks different

I'm so glad this came out! It turned out amazing, I hope you got the cred in-class

Fezhoof responds:

Thank you Rick!!! Wouldn't have been possible without you. Somehow I did end up getting an A for this haha.

Recent Game Reviews

2 Game Reviews

this bird needs to be crucified like jesus christ for what hes put me through

bruh

Recent Audio Reviews

10 Audio Reviews

fork status: unbalanced

Snackers responds:

my bad officer, you got me. ill go in, just leave my dawgs out of this

dude i love joji music we want joji music

Droid responds:

but joji was in the planes when they hit the pentagon.....

Recent Art Reviews

98 Art Reviews

As someone who's taken a lot of "inspiration" from Booth, I'd say try loosening up with the hatching, and keeping lines more continuous. If you look closely at his patterns, the actual strokes follow contours veyr naturalistically, and you can push these curves to add much more depth. You can see how your lines straightened out when you moved to the inkwork. He also subtly plays with line weight a lot more, see if you can push it to the level he has going on.

Personally, I love your pencil sketch more for those reasons, it feels less rigid which helps a lot in the flow of the piece. Franklin is less "tight" than you would expect, his sharpness comes more from line placement and control rather than the parallelicity of the linework itself. I think if you reattempted the pencil sketch at like, a 25% larger scale, you'd be able to add more detail and lines in for each of the surfaces, and that would do a lot to pop it out.

IAMPIXELS responds:

Wow. I really appreciate your insight, especially coming from someone who also admires Franklin's work. When working on it, I got the impression the hatching was overdone in retrospect, and I'm glad you pointed that out. I'll keep your points in mind going forward. 🙏

sick

rip gord downie

guh

Richard Steubens Jr. @RickSteubens

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